Some politicains demand that banks pay more back than that these banks have received. I can understand that the bank should pay an interest, but on top of that they should pay some extra money. Why should they, the government have just given on loan to the banks nothing more? Just imagine that banks do just the same and ask you to pay extra isn’t that the end of the world.
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vrijdag 2 oktober 2009
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Some politicains watch your spelling! politicians demand that banks pay more back pay back more than that these banks have received than they received . I can understand that the bank banks should pay an interest, but on top of that they should pay some extra money. not coherent --> on top of that they have to pay extra? Why should they, the government have just given on loan to the banks nothing more? very unclear sentence Just imagine that banks do just exactly the same and ask you to pay extra isn’t that the end of the world. not coherent
When you say 'some politicians', who do you mean? you need a source here. You need to pay more attention to the coherence of your text. Watch your flow.
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