In the 21st century we notice that our World has evolved in all kind of ways, we now drive huge cars, we call everyone, everywhere at any time, etc...Although, did we really change the world with all our technology and knowledge or did we just act as if we were unbeatable ?
Because of our blind trust in the systems of our banks and their knowledge, many people have lost their jobs, their lives and their money. For a lot of people this last week has been the final drop, they withdrew their money and put it back into their socks under the bed, as if we travelled back in time. Even the largest banks are in trouble and are crying for help, but for some (a.e Lehman Brothers) it is already to late.
Blommaert Joyce
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[title: back to the '30s]
In the 21st century we notice that our World has evolved in all kind of ways, we now drive huge cars, we call everyone, everywhere at any time, etc...Although [use Yet or Still here], did we really change the world with all our technology and knowledge or did we just act as if we were unbeatable ? Because of our blind trust in the systems of our banks and their knowledge, many people have lost their jobs, their lives and their money. For a lot of people this last week has been the final drop, they withdrew their money and put it back into their socks under the bed, as if we travelled back in time. Even the largest banks are in trouble and are crying for help, but for some (a.e Lehman Brothers) it is already to [too] late.
Five sentences = one too many. Good flow and logic. Convincing plea.
olaf
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