The With House announced Tuesday that it will partially nationalise the biggest banks of the US. In exchange, Washington would receive stocks of those banks and should control more their expenses. This measure (250 billion), part of the 700-billion ‘Paulson-Plan’, could help to stabilise the financial system and recover the (world) economy. The With House and Joe Sixpack have to wait for another couple of months, whether this action and all other actions in the past months will help.
Emmanuel Caudron
The Times(online), Wednesday July 16 2008
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The With [spelling: White] House announced Tuesday that it will partially nationalise the biggest banks of the US. In exchange, Washington would receive stocks of those banks and should control more their expenses [word order: should control their expenses more]. This measure (250 billion), part of the 700-billion ‘Paulson-Plan’, could help to stabilise the financial system and recover the (world) economy [something recovers, so here 'help the economy recover]. The With [spelling] House and Joe Sixpack have to wait for another couple of months [and see] whether this action and all other actions in the past months will help.
Concept and flow ok, but mind the language errors. Be more accurate next time.
olaf
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