The British taxpaper is going to be the victim in the £40bn rescue mission of british weakest banks.
This could prevoke yet another black day at the stock markets, that's why it's not unlikely that bank shares will be temporarily suspended. With this injection, the government tries to put a stop to the rumors that the banks capital cushions are not enough to prevent them from collapsing. Although that might need an injection of £75bn.
Nelis De Clercq
Source: http://www.guardian.co.uk/business/2008/oct/12/banking-economy
maandag 13 oktober 2008
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The British taxpaper is going to be the victim in the £40bn rescue mission of british [British: capital letter] weakest banks.
This could prevoke [provoke] yet another black day at the stock markets, that's why [good link] it's not unlikely that bank shares will be temporarily suspended. With this injection, the government tries to put a stop to the rumors that the banks capital cushions are not enough to prevent them from collapsing. Although that might need an injection of £75bn.
Good balance of longer and shorter sentences. To improve the balance of the last sentence, add: 'additional', which also refers back to your opening statement and makes the reader go full circle.
Although that might need an additional injection of £75bn.
olaf
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