zaterdag 18 oktober 2008

'Safe' your money

The modern man nowadays is saving his money on an old-fashioned way, this due to the fear of losing his own savings which are administered by big banks such as Dexia and Fortis.
Although the money is safe on a bank account, people nowadays choose to manage their own money.At present, enterprises selling lockers are pleased with the fincial crisis because the sales of hawse-holes has been increased enormously lately.
The people who caused this increase are mostly the erlder people who are scared to loose their possessions, they simply don't believe banks are able to take care of their money in hard times like these.

Michiel De Baere

bron: http://www.standaard.be/Artikel/Detail.aspx?artikelId=G7B21NFPU&word=kluizen

1 opmerking:

EcoEnglish zei

The modern man nowadays is saving his money on [in] an old-fashioned way, this due to the fear of losing his own savings which are administered by big banks such as Dexia and Fortis.
Although the money is safe on a bank account, people nowadays choose to manage their own money.At present, enterprises selling lockers are pleased with the fincial crisis because the sales of hawse-holes has been [has increased / has been increasing]increased enormously lately.
The people who caused this increase are mostly the erlder people who are scared to loose [lose] their possessions, they simply don't believe banks are able to take care of their money in hard times like these.

Good flow, mind some language issues (tense, spelling)

olaf