The top bosses dont take the debt of the crisis, they see themself rather as the biggest victims of the financial crisis. They dont want admit that this crisis found its origin in their aggressive & acquisitive behaviour. They dont even see a solution for the crisis. But the government will use its power to mix themself in the board of the banks, and so look after a more successful policy. The competition between the banks must stop and had to make place for individual control of their systems.
Cornette Matthias
:: http://www.guardian.co.uk/business/blog/2008/oct/14/marketturmoil-creditcrunch ::
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The top bosses dont [don't] take the debt [depth??] of the crisis, they see themself [themselves]rather as the biggest victims of the financial crisis. They dont [don't] want [to] admit that this crisis found [had its origin] its origin in their aggressive & acquisitive behaviour. They dont [don't] even see a solution for the crisis. But the government will use its power to mix themself [themselves] in the board of the banks, and so look after [here: look for] a more successful policy. The competition between the banks must stop and had [has] to make place for individual control [not control here but: monitoring] of their systems.
Too many language errors and you used five sentences (1 too many). Flow is ok.
olaf
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