zondag 12 oktober 2008

Could it be more ?



Voltron , Frère,Brito … only a glimpse of an impressive list of CEO’s who earn over more than 2000000 EUR a year…is this reasonable ?
Because of the descent of the purchasing power, it becomes more and more difficult for an average employee to finance their daily expenses. It’s very frustrating for them when they realise that most of the top Belgian CEO’s earn incredible high wages. The fact is if companies still can justify those immense sums every year on the CEO’s bank account that could be the start of a long discussion in these days of economic uncertainty.

Jasper Dierckx

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Voltron , Frère,Brito … only a glimpse of an impressive list of CEO’s [spelling: CEOs] who earn over more than 2000000 [€2m] EUR a year…is this reasonable ?
Because of the descent of the [drop 'the'] purchasing power, it becomes more and more difficult for an average employee to finance their [either: employee to finance his or her expenses, or: employees to finance their expenses] daily expenses. It’s very frustrating for them when they realise that most of the top Belgian CEO’s [CEOs] earn incredible [adverb: incredibly high wages] high wages. The fact is [add 'that'] if companies still can justify those immense sums every year on the CEO’s [genitive of plural ending in 's': CEOs'] bank account that could be the start of a long discussion in these days of economic uncertainty.

Mind lower level issues (articles, adjective v. adverbs). Good content and flow.

olaf