More and more workers aren’t able to save anymore, so most of them are living paycheck to paycheck.
Yet, the workers don’t want to be in trouble, most of them have to count their money to make sure they can pay the bills every month.
Most of the employees are also encouraged to put some money into savings, even when prices keep on rising.
It’s almost impossible to live comfortably in these hard times, and that’s why earning more money would be the perfect solution for many employees’ problems.
Alisa De Loor
Source:
http://edition.cnn.com/2008/LIVING/worklife/10/08/cb.workers.paycheck/index.html
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More and more workers aren’t able to save anymore, so most of them are living paycheck to paycheck.
Yet, the workers don’t want to be in trouble, most of them have to count their money to make sure they can pay the bills every month.
Most of the employees are also encouraged to put some money into savings, even when prices keep on rising.
It’s almost impossible to live comfortably in these hard times, and that’s why earning more money would be the perfect solution for many employees’ problems.
There's something fishy about the 2nd sentence. The structure isn't quite right. The jump from the 2nd to the 3rd sentence, makes sense at first but as you read on you wonder 'who encourages?' and don't get an answer.
Take another look at the flow, your English looks fine.
olaf
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