maandag 13 oktober 2008

What do banks really offer you?


Banks are always looking for new clients, especially for students, because they will probably stay with the bank for the rest of their lives. Some banks try to convince new people by offering some attractive perks, like a free cinema ticket or £ 50 cash. Its important you choose the right account because, nice perks mostly come in hand with a small interest free-overdraft or high overdraft charges. So don’t choose a bank because it offers you some nice perks, but choose the best deal that helps you to survive.

Bram Baeté

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EcoEnglish zei

Banks are always looking for new clients, especially for students, because they will probably stay with the bank for the rest of their lives. Some banks try to convince new people by offering some attractive perks, like a free cinema ticket or £ 50 cash. Its [It is ]important you choose the right account because, [no comma here] nice perks mostly come in hand with a small interest free-overdraft or high overdraft charges. So don’t choose a bank because it offers you some nice perks, but choose the best deal that helps you to survive.

Good concept: giving advice, both in title and content. Flow ok.

Mind the its/it's difference

olaf