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Bank robberies: What to do in a bank robbery?
Since the credit-crises bank robbing isn’t a lucrative job anymore.
One of the reasons is that bank robbers have to invest a lot when they want to rob a bank, from a pistol to powerful drugs.
Banks give their employees training about how to act when a bank robbery is in progress, but the latest weeks the banks are robbed by the managers themselves.
After the bank robbery , the worst is yet to come, victims can feel very shocked or they can be very happy they’re still alive, but most of the people have various feelings.
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Ruben Den Ticht
zondag 26 oktober 2008
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Bank robberies: What to do in a bank robbery?
Since the credit-crises [singular: crisis] bank robbing isn’t a lucrative job anymore.
One of the reasons is that bank robbers have to invest a lot when they want to rob a bank, from a pistol to powerful drugs.
Banks give their employees training about how to act when a bank robbery is in progress, but the latest weeks the banks are robbed by the managers themselves.
After the bank robbery , the worst is yet to come, victims can feel very shocked or they can be very happy they’re still alive, but most of the people have various feelings.
[cut and paste feel: the sentences all have the same topic, but they don't flow, e.g. link between S2 and S3 can be much stronger. Furthermore, the text does not live up to its title: no tips on how to act during a bank robbery.
Olaf]
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