Last night the 15 most important European Union’s countries discussed about a solution for the financial crisis. After a few hours most countries were in favour of the Brown rescue plan which attempts to boost liquidity. It’s essential that the European Union takes measures before the whole financial system collapses. Next Wednesday the 15 participants are going to propose the plan to the other 11 member states in Brussels.
Bram Claeys
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Last night the 15 most important European Union’s countries discussed about [drop 'about'; you discuss something] a solution for the financial crisis. After a few hours [add a comma here] most countries were in favour of the Brown rescue plan [add a comma here] which attempts to boost liquidity. It’s essential that the European Union takes measures before the whole financial system collapses. Next Wednesday the 15 participants are going to propose the plan to the other 11 member states in Brussels.
Good flow and content. Mind the use of commas
olaf
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