After a week in which the financial system went through the worst crisis in decades, the governments of the industrialized countries at last seem to have found the right tools to get the markets moving again.
In our own country, we could see our government intervening even twice. And successfully. First there was the great commotion about Fortis (which, in the end, received more support from the Netherlands) and last Tuesday, DEXIA turned out to be virtually bankrupt. Summing up, I think we can conclude that all governments must prepare for a worldwide economic recession.
Olivier Candeel
source: http://www.economist.com/finance/displayStory.cfm?story_id=12408936&source=features_box_main
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More than 4 sentences + 1st sentence is completely copied from the source. Try to paraphrase more.
Good use of linkers and signposting 'I think we can conclude'...
olaf
I have corrected the first sentence later, a day before the deadline. But then you already had left the feedback.
I'll try to work on the rest.
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