Today, banks are balancing on the thin line between staying in the running and going bankrupt. This is a consequence of the financial crisis, the recession, etc. People start to massively withdraw money from their accounts, and the banks don’t dare to loan to other banks. Which only makes the situation worse. Banks and governments take desperate measures to keep up but it’s only a matter of time before things will escalate.
Valérie Boyen
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Today, banks are balancing on the thin line between staying in the running and going bankrupt. This is a consequence of [good link] the financial crisis, the recession, etc. People start to massively withdraw money from their accounts, and the banks don’t dare to loan [or in BrE, to lend] to other banks. [replace the full stop by a comma] Which only makes the situation worse. Banks and governments take desperate measures to keep up but it’s only a matter of time before things will escalate.
Mind the four sentence limit. Clear logic and flow. Good English.
olaf
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