Even though it's harder to rob a bank than 50 years ago, there is a robbery in Europe about every 1,5 hour.
It is amazing why gangsters still try to rob a bank nowadays, as safety systems are overwhelming the world and possibilities to succeed in a robbery diminish considerably. The reason why people rob a bank might have something to do with violent video games or movies, or maybe it’s due to the fact that banks obviously possess a lot of money and bank robberies
still succeed sometimes. This kind of crime can be solved partially by improving education and social standards, as well by raising the security of banks.
It is amazing why gangsters still try to rob a bank nowadays, as safety systems are overwhelming the world and possibilities to succeed in a robbery diminish considerably. The reason why people rob a bank might have something to do with violent video games or movies, or maybe it’s due to the fact that banks obviously possess a lot of money and bank robberies
still succeed sometimes. This kind of crime can be solved partially by improving education and social standards, as well by raising the security of banks.
Pieter Buyl
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...as well by raising the security of banks. [as well AS by...]
Captivating start (you could have jazzed up the title a bit though). Good vocab and use of links 'the reason why...'
olaf
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