In America, health care is becoming so expensive that medical practitioners are promoting their “cheaper prices”. America has no social security system like Belgium and for a lot of people who can’t afford a private health insurance, hospitalisation means long debts.
Because of the expensive prices many people are even delaying going to the doctor. A possible solution for this problem is to force employers to pay a part of its employees health insurance.
Griet Vandenhouweele
Source: http://www.heritage.org/Research/HealthCare/hl1019.cfm
http://www.aflcio.org/issues/healthcare/whatswrong/
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In America, health care is becoming so expensive that medical practitioners are promoting their “cheaper prices”. America has no social security system like Belgium and for a lot of people who can’t afford a private health insurance, hospitalisation means long [high is better in this case]debts.
Because of the expensive prices [add comma here]many people are even delaying going to the doctor. A possible solution for this problem is to force employers to pay a part of its [their, employers is a plural] employees health insurance.
Good flow, but try to limit the number of different subjects more. Good use of grammar and vocab.
olaf
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