dinsdag 14 oktober 2008

A first stap



For weeks governments have been trying to save their own banks, without wondering if it could damage other banks. Finally you can see a comprehensive global answer to the confidence gap, but it is definitely not enough, more government intervention in the short term is needed. The simple reason being: if they don’t do anything about it together, you will see the output in rich and poor countries collapse. The problem is that it’s not simple to fix this crisis, because it’s a much deeper and broader crisis than the ones we knew before.



Christophe Clara

(source: http://www.economist.com/opinion/displayStory.cfm?source=most_commented&Story_ID=12381429)

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[Title: a first stEp]

For weeks [add a comma] governments have been trying to save their own banks, without wondering if it could damage other banks. Finally [add a comma] you can see a comprehensive global answer to the confidence gap, but it is definitely not enough, more government intervention in the short term is needed. The simple reason being: if they don’t do anything about it together, you will see the output in rich and poor countries collapse. The problem is that it’s not simple to fix this crisis, because it’s a much deeper and broader crisis than the ones we knew before.

Good job, flow and links ok. Mind spelling and the use of commas.

olaf