The American government is doing everything what it takes to ensure the viability of America's banking system. The government created a plan to end the credit crisis. Just as in Europe it agreed to combine a partial nationalization with a package of loan guarantees. The reason is simple: by taking over the free market for a short period, the American government ensures its people a good-working long-term economic future.
Wouter Staelens
http://www.timesonline.co.uk/tol/news/world/us_and_americas/article4942192.ece
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The American government is doing everything what [that] it takes to ensure the viability of America's banking system. The government created a plan to end the credit crisis. Just as in Europe [add a comma here] it agreed to combine a partial nationalization with a package of loan guarantees. The reason is simple: by taking over the free market for a short period, the American government ensures its people a good-working long-term economic future.
Excellent flow, mind the use of commas.
olaf
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